50 girls 50 contest entry

[jpdelarama]

Here is my entry on the 50 girls 50 comic contest held by Frank Cho and Doug Murray here is the link http://www.imagecomics.com/messageboard/viewforum.php?f=47
Pencils and Inks are done by me. Comments and Suggestions are really appreciated, thanks hope you like it.

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm7/jepoyyy/50%20girls%2050%20contest%20entry/page1.jpg

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm7/jepoyyy/50%20girls%2050%20contest%20entry/page2.jpg

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm7/jepoyyy/50%20girls%2050%20contest%20entry/page3.jpg

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm7/jepoyyy/50%20girls%2050%20contest%20entry/page4.jpg

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm7/jepoyyy/50%20girls%2050%20contest%20entry/page5.jpg

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm7/jepoyyy/50%20girls%2050%20contest%20entry/page6.jpg

[OZ!]

Not bad. My only thing is that the pages seem rushed. You do some really cool rendering and backgrounds but once you get to your people it seems like you can't pick a style and they get a bit stiff. I can only assume this comes from not fully rendering your characters before the inking stage. Otherwise this is pretty good stuff.

PS Try to vary character activity in multi figure scenes. We know they are on a ship but that doesn't mean they all have to be sitting up straight with their hands at the same width touching buttons. ;) Also, adding line weight and thickness to your women's hair can add weight to what may simply look like overlapping lines

On the plus side, I really like your background work (pg 4/ first half of the last page). Really slick stuff.