check it out!

[cidvicious831]

ok so i've read how to submit your art and they said its okay to show you guys my devant art link. check it out and give me only the NEGATIVE points of my art. it will only make me better. thanks guys http://cidvicious831.deviantart.com/art/miss-wonder-woman-106553360 oh please check every pic for a full review. thanks again :)

[The Dag]

i dont do links.

[cidvicious831]

i dont do links.


its ok.thanks though

[soulsyfn]

You know... I usually don't do links. However i did do this one just to see.

I would say that you should post a link to a single image so that people can crit "a" piece rather than your entire portfolio. So... here is my crit on the pieces that I saw in your portfolio.

Your samuri picture has very good detail work in the armor and the sword. The other pieces have some good points as well (i.e., structure, concept, etc.), however, you really lack the ability to render the human form. All of your figures look like they were drawn by somebody completely different than the person that drew all of the detail work on the armor and sword. Or, you just have a great technical ability with rendering armor and swords.

Keep posting but please link to a direct piece of art to crit you on.

[cidvicious831]

[QUOTE=soulsyfn]You know... I usually don't do links. However i did do this one just to see.

I would say that you should post a link to a single image so that people can crit "a" piece rather than your entire portfolio. So... here is my crit on the pieces that I saw in your portfolio.

Your samuri picture has very good detail work in the armor and the sword. The other pieces have some good points as well (i.e., structure, concept, etc.), however, you really lack the ability to render the human form. All of your figures look like they were drawn by somebody completely different than the person that drew all of the detail work on the armor and sword. Or, you just have a great technical ability with rendering armor and swords.

Keep posting but please link to a direct piece of art to crit you on.[/QUOTE

oh.. yeah i guess your right. ill fix it. thanks for crit man. and yes that was all me. figures and rendering

[soulsyfn]

Well now that you linked to the Wonder Woman... :)

Her head seems small, I like the way you did her shoulders to the top of her rib cage. The rib cage however seems off though. Her forearms look a tad short and her left hand thumb looks odd as well.

I can't really comment on the coloring because I have no clue how to give you advice on that.

Keep posting, lets see more!

[cidvicious831]

Well now that you linked to the Wonder Woman... :)

Her head seems small, I like the way you did her shoulders to the top of her rib cage. The rib cage however seems off though. Her forearms look a tad short and her left hand thumb looks odd as well.

I can't really comment on the coloring because I have no clue how to give you advice on that.

Keep posting, lets see more!

yeah on her rib cage, i tried to make her tilt a little. but ill post some more later. thanks again