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eclesiastes
06-15-2008, 09:04 PM
hi guys, my name is danny jiménez, here put some links of my works, i hope you like it

http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/page1-v2-0-79888554
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/page2-v2-0-79888886
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/page3-v2-0-79889030
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/page4v-2-0-79889178
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/page5-v2-0-79889288
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/page8-v2-0-79889920
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/page9-v2-0-79890090
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/guardians02-81213083
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/guardians02-page2-81213246
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/guardians02-page3-81213347
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/guardians2-page4-81213512
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/guardiansv2-page5-81464581
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/guardians2-page6-81464820
http://el-ecle.deviantart.com/art/guardian2-pages9-10-81465387

robotsatemygrandma
06-15-2008, 10:04 PM
It looks very well done... your inking style is amazing. :carrot:

But the feet on page 9 look unnatural and lack the detail you put into the frame itself as well as the cars on page 2. Page 2 just seems so empty and awkward compared to the rest. Maybe try moving some of the frames closer together or something.

Page 5 is just simply awesome. How you worked in 2 different styles really makes it stand out. I like how you worked it in as a flashback/thought/memory.

jeffo46
06-16-2008, 07:22 AM
Instead of leaving links,post your pages through photobucket,it would be much easier for everyone to see your work that way.

sevans
06-16-2008, 05:39 PM
I'm not opening all those links.

maverick
06-16-2008, 05:46 PM
I'm not opening all those links.

honestly, in the time it took you to hit reply, type that, and click submit, you could have looked at at least half of them.

:nyah:

The Dag
06-16-2008, 08:50 PM
people hate links.. you will get more people looking with out links..

armornsilverstreak
06-16-2008, 09:04 PM
you know what? this art's so good it's worth clicking the link

sevans
06-16-2008, 09:16 PM
"honestly, in the time it took you to hit reply, type that, and click submit, you could have looked at at least half of them."

Actually New Zealand has one of the slowest internet systems in the world, so I don't think so.

PLUS, I hate opening links in general.

Caio Reis
06-16-2008, 09:54 PM
Dude, use photobucket or Imageshack to post your stuff in the forums. People usually avoid links and you'll get a lot less feedback. ;)

You've got a nice gallery on DA, though.

eclesiastes
06-21-2008, 08:57 PM
eeehh definitely Caio Reiss are right!

well, now only i´ll put images.sorry and............take it easy guys!!!

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/1998/page1v20byelecleoe8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/715/page2v20byelecleob3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9130/page3v20byelecleiv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9382/page4v20byelecleoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/5039/page5v20byeleclehv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/1184/page6v20byelecleee4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/7228/page7v20byelecleob8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4251/page8v20byeleclear5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9375/page9v20byelecleke9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

that is it

zcotty
06-21-2008, 09:44 PM
Great stuff. Nice inking!

This might be stupid... (not knowing the characters and etc.) But at the very end in the panel with the closeups of the feet... is he supposed to have only four toes?

otherwise very cool stuff.

jeffo46
06-22-2008, 07:40 AM
See how much better it is when you post through photobucket? A lot of people on here don't like going through all those links you posted,so this way is much easier,and now that you did,I must say,your art is absolutely spectacular.Definately great stuff with a European influence.Reminds me a lot of the stuff that I would see in the Warren line of magazines in the late 70's.Again,great art!

sebzero11
06-22-2008, 10:55 AM
Those are some nice pages. Looks really good!

OZ!
06-24-2008, 03:15 AM
DAMN YOUSE!!!!!

I actually went and clicked all the links and then realized you posted half of them!!!
TYLER ANGRY!!! TYLER SMASH!!!!!

Great art. The only thing that I can crit is the fact that you go from smooth to hard edges too eagerly and it kills some of the action in the adjustment. Simply put, its a style inconsistency. Nice stuff regardless.

Steven Forbes
06-24-2008, 02:54 PM
Damned nice stuff! Are you looking for work? I know a guy...

-Steven