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bungo75
06-01-2008, 10:52 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/Bungo75/Page_1small.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/Bungo75/Page_2smallSFW.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/Bungo75/Page_3small.jpg

The bikini was added very fast and poorly for the post.

the_gothamite
06-02-2008, 08:45 AM
This is cool. I think the two weak points I pick up are, your facial anatomy is sometimes lacking, particularly when you do three quarter views- maybe try using a little more source material; and the colouring. I really think the colouring takes away from the overall success of the pages. I'd suggest toning it down somewhat, or at least trying to compliment your light sources and shadow a little more.