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spookydonkey
05-31-2008, 09:57 PM
http://spookydonkey.com/page1

http://spookydonkey.com/page2words


http://spookydonkey.com/page3words


http://spookydonkey.com/page4words


http://spookydonkey.com/page5words
balloons are temp for now

mrbrice
06-01-2008, 11:02 AM
really good stuff. distinct lines and cool style.

only have one quible. is the kids arm cut off in frame one? doesn't seem to be blood and the character is reacting calmly.

sebzero11
06-01-2008, 11:41 AM
really good stuff. distinct lines and cool style.

only have one quible. is the kids arm cut off in frame one? doesn't seem to be blood and the character is reacting calmly.

Ha! I thought that for a second, too, but it's the end of the lit cigarette in the 1st panel, not a severed limb.

Maybe the 2nd & 3rd panel should switch places. That way we'd be panning out from the extreme close-up on the cigarette. Just to make it a bit more clear.

Great work, though. i really REALLY like this.

sevans
06-02-2008, 08:39 PM
I thought the same thing about panel one. A few less folds and some smoke or just colours should be enough to clear that up though.

Otherwise fun style and cool expressions.

BenelGermosen
06-03-2008, 02:31 AM
Don't lose the balloons. They work well with the art.

dhyatt
06-04-2008, 07:04 AM
I like the clean line work. Cool stuff!