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jkf724
04-11-2008, 01:49 PM
Just finished some Fathom pencils. The script is from the last Wizard talent search, always thought it was a cool three page script but I was busy working on other stuff at the time. Anyway, C&C are welcome.

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii20/jkf724/Fathom_Pencils_1.jpg

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii20/jkf724/Fathom_Pencils_2.jpg

http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii20/jkf724/Fathom_Pencils_3.jpg

dpendleton
04-11-2008, 06:29 PM
Very nice this style reminds me of Ben Caldwell, I like these pages good stuff.

joel
04-11-2008, 08:34 PM
can't say i'm a fan of fathom, but i would buy it if you were drawing it. i can't see anything wrong with these pages.

jkf724
04-12-2008, 01:33 AM
Thanks for the kind words guys. I'm a huge admirer of Caldwell's. And Timm, Oeming, Cooke, the list goes on and on.

I have a lot of respect for guys that draw in that Top Cow style, but I agree. I would but a lot more of their books if they loosened up a little.

Caio Reis
04-12-2008, 02:54 PM
These are really good. It's not easy to use less line efectively. You're doing good there.

Some suggestion in the storytelling:

page 01, panel03 is the same as panel 05. There's no need for the two of them, I'd go with panel 03 in place of panel 05.

Everything else looks good! :thumbs:

Aaron Walther
04-12-2008, 05:19 PM
I really like your style. I see a lot of those influences in your work and it looks great!