View Full Version : A looooong way from Kansas...
04-06-2008, 11:57 AM
Was inspired to draw this for a ontest.
04-06-2008, 12:34 PM
That is FANTASTIC!
04-06-2008, 01:00 PM
04-06-2008, 03:12 PM
04-06-2008, 08:49 PM
if i may.... everything looks awesome.... except the composition. You have a lot of dead space on the page, plus the characters are kinda squished together. D's sword is kinda obstructing wolverines face. now im entirely self-taught(and not even that well) but i've seen a few things on how the readers eye tends to gravitate towards faces, something instantly identifiable... Might i suggest maybe movin the sword on the other side of d's body, maybe tryin to space the characters a bit. i think it might help distinguish their individual personalities too. But thats just 1 guys opinion... Again retarded awesome tho...
04-06-2008, 09:18 PM
The first thing I saw was the sword in wolverines face.
Apart from that small, but very annoying thing, it looks pretty damn sexy to me. Great pencils.
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