View Full Version : Animal (a One Hour Comic Project)

04-01-2008, 08:04 PM
most of my ideas come when i'm taking a bath or when i'm in bed... animal was one of them...
the cover came to me in bath
the last page came to me in bed.

so i was very very pissed and mad at something, i couldn't take it anymore...
i put DEVIL WEARS PRADA and SONS OF AZRAEL and started bangin my head and then took some papers and put all my anger in this comic...

uh... later i made the philosophy that the guy talking here is the the man's inner evil speaking to him, it's what a killer's thoughts say as he murders...
my favorite page is the last one, i had this picture of a guy with the shadow of an animal in my head... and it turned out just the way i wanted it , the true evil insanity of the guy in an asylum...

this is not my normal art it's completely experimental... it's been done in one hour, mixed stuff, pen, water color, markers and hundred rage.

actually i'm gonna put this in my 10th anniversary anthology. it's gonna be a thick and disturbing comic.

ok no more talks... here it goes...
oh and this is new, no more 2007 and 2006 shits...
drawn a month ago,


04-01-2008, 08:56 PM
wow. This has a ton of potential... I could completely see this concept used any any number of villians! Nice story telling and energy in the art... And very nice with the dream sequence and going to the straight jacket...

04-01-2008, 09:03 PM
Kong's spot on.

You should use this as the roughes for some finished pages. Even with tighter more refined artwork, the colour scheme, ink splatters and text layout would express alot of anger and emotion.

Give it a makeover, and it could really be a very powerful short story.

04-01-2008, 09:42 PM
I forgot to say that this has a real nice honesty to it....

j giar
04-02-2008, 12:07 AM
I'm actually very impressed Capt...And I don't mean that as a demeaning statement. This has so much emotion...so much heart. I agree with everyone else. A more focused or cleaner version would punch this up two fold. Of all the pages, however, page 3 is the odd one of the bunch. And I think the main problem is the pages images are so centered and symmetrical...But still nice bit of rage. Jim

04-05-2008, 01:16 AM

i thought this was supposed to be hated!!! but well, i guess i'm the only guy not liking the experimental stuff too much,...
thanks for the kind words, really, you made my day kong, sevans, jim... a make over u say, point taken, but would it be as feeling carrying as this? i mean i drew this with anger and well you can see the anger, when i redraw it i'm afraid it'll loose it's rage, help me out a bit.( i will redraw it)

by my surprise i see that page 2 is deleted, was it done by the mods?
if so i had just seen some posts here wich made me think that it didn't matter to post it... if not then tellme to repost it.

oh oh, and the end title (credits) sound track is STATIC-X: CANNIBAL, but in that version he says animal


jim: page 3 was an honest mistake, use of too much water color and making it fade your work :( there was this woman body with one arm, a burnt skull cut in half from the jaw and an eye and a bunch of hair stuck to it, an arm and a leg loose on the ground and ofcourse... a ton of intestines O_O
ok i guess that's fucked up. lol oh and and a splited boob!
should i make it blur in the remake?

04-05-2008, 09:30 PM
I think making thingas more defind in the updates would help.
I love the main picture. some of the pages are really good you can tell you put a lot into it

04-06-2008, 04:09 PM
what's thingas?
and thanks :)