Recent Commissions

[Caio Reis]

Hey, gang! Long time no post! Been so busy lately I barely have time to check the forums to see what you guys have been up to :( And since my curent work will take several months to be published all I have to show are these commissions of late. Thanks for checking out!

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6207/josedearmastigra01finalqm7.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/4172/josedearmastigra02finalsl7.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/4909/josedearmasww01finallowge8.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/9007/josedearmasww02finallowki3.jpg

[midknight]

great job

[Gandalf Fett]

Beautiful just beautiful.

Except that third picture with Wonder Woman - there's something about the face that I can't quite put my finger on.... something off with the perspective? Or maybe it's just me :blink:

[dpendleton]

Nice I like the tigra.

[karenspiderwoman]

I see what the one guy was talking about with the face with the first WW but you did it right but there an opitical illusion happening there the back of the jaw on WW left side is drawn correctly but because the shadow under the right side doesn't connect to the left it appear to seem a little weird but that can be fixed in the coloring stages

You actually did nothing wrong - beautiful work - can you tell us the title of the book you are working on

[xaltair]

Wow, nice ladies. Your faces are very impressive, especially that first Wonder Woman.

[massacremike]

First WW, left eye is too high. That's the prob. Easily fixed.

Other than that, very impressive linework here.

[Nick Pitarra]

Nice work man...glad to see you back!

~nick

[xombey]

all good and sexy.

but the 2nd tigra--her lower torso seems wrong. shouldn't there be an ovelap, so that we don't see the tail coming out the rear end?

[Paul Sanderson]

Looks good, some very beautiful women there.

[ronin300]

The lower half of the second Tigra is way off. A bit of it could be fixed by getting rid of the belly button, so you're not clearly seeing the front and back of the figure at the same time. It also looks like you've rearranged her spine a bit which would be a tougher fix. The second Wonder Woman seems to have proportion issues. The heads a little too big for the body. Your line work is nice and tight which is good and I really like the simple but really effective way you've rendered the hair on all four pieces.

[borisandralph]

Although there is a lot of skill on show, there are also lots of problems with the anatomy.
In the first pic, unless she's Linda Blair then her neck is broken, try turning your head to see a 3/4 view of the front.
The second pic has serious problems from the pelvis down.
The third one is really nice and is only spoilt by misaligned eyes.
The fourth one is also nice but her head is much too big.
Just things to be aware of.

[Miguel Marques]

Good work good expressions.

[Caio Reis]

great job

Thanks! Did my best on these.

[Caio Reis]

Beautiful just beautiful.

Except that third picture with Wonder Woman - there's something about the face that I can't quite put my finger on.... something off with the perspective? Or maybe it's just me :blink:

I can see it too. Something not right there! Thanks for the note!

[Caio Reis]

Nice I like the tigra.

Thanks! Wich one did you enjoy the most?

[Caio Reis]

I see what the one guy was talking about with the face with the first WW but you did it right but there an opitical illusion happening there the back of the jaw on WW left side is drawn correctly but because the shadow under the right side doesn't connect to the left it appear to seem a little weird but that can be fixed in the coloring stages

You actually did nothing wrong - beautiful work - can you tell us the title of the book you are working on

Thanks for your comments and for pointing out what seems wrong! I should have studied more the figure, but it's too late to fix it at this point. :(

I'm working on a Ted Dekker novel adaptation. The books should be published in december, I guess.

[Caio Reis]

Wow, nice ladies. Your faces are very impressive, especially that first Wonder Woman.

Thanks, mate! I'm glad you liked it. :bounce:
I think I could have done that figure a little better, though. Like previously pointed out something looks wrong there.

[Caio Reis]

First WW, left eye is too high. That's the prob. Easily fixed.

Other than that, very impressive linework here.

Yeah it does look a bit off! Thanks for the pointer and for the comments! :thumbs:

[Caio Reis]

Nice work man...glad to see you back!

~nick

Thanks Nick! I'll be around! ;)

[Caio Reis]

all good and sexy.

but the 2nd tigra--her lower torso seems wrong. shouldn't there be an ovelap, so that we don't see the tail coming out the rear end?

Humm. I'll have to check that out! Thanks for the poiter! :thumbs:

[Caio Reis]

Looks good, some very beautiful women there.

Thanks for the kind workds, Paul! :bounce:

[Caio Reis]

The lower half of the second Tigra is way off. A bit of it could be fixed by getting rid of the belly button, so you're not clearly seeing the front and back of the figure at the same time. It also looks like you've rearranged her spine a bit which would be a tougher fix. The second Wonder Woman seems to have proportion issues. The heads a little too big for the body. Your line work is nice and tight which is good and I really like the simple but really effective way you've rendered the hair on all four pieces.

Thanks for your comments! I guess you're right about the Tigra but hey, cats can bend! Haven't you notice how flexible those little flurry things can be??? :p

[Caio Reis]

Although there is a lot of skill on show, there are also lots of problems with the anatomy.
In the first pic, unless she's Linda Blair then her neck is broken, try turning your head to see a 3/4 view of the front.
The second pic has serious problems from the pelvis down.
The third one is really nice and is only spoilt by misaligned eyes.
The fourth one is also nice but her head is much too big.
Just things to be aware of.

Thanks for taking your time to review those pieces! I'm certainly aware of the things you pointed out now and will be more careful in the future!

[Caio Reis]

Good work good expressions.

Thanks Miguel! Hey, how's the coloring going?