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Wayne Drake
01-24-2008, 01:47 AM
couple of pre-photoshopped pages of SPY CRUSHER :banana: Hope ya dig, let me know what you think :har:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/boxman_deluxe/034.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/boxman_deluxe/035.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/boxman_deluxe/036.jpg

dpendleton
01-24-2008, 11:43 AM
I like these pages,but damn spy hunter is in trouble man, Hitler got him all hugged up. :eek:

Luke de Sade
01-24-2008, 01:53 PM
Is he Spy Smasher's son? :)

I like your style. Simple, and clean. And man, Spy Crusher is rubbing his nasties on Hitler's belly! :har:

John Rauch
01-24-2008, 02:01 PM
Hitler's been hittin the gym for reals yo!

Shaman
01-24-2008, 06:17 PM
Your hero kind of remind me of this one
http://www.drunkduck.com/Hero_By_Night/

Wayne Drake
01-24-2008, 06:24 PM
Your hero kind of remind me of this one
http://www.drunkduck.com/Hero_By_Night/

yeah, i've heard of him too. Good thing this particular Spy Crusher doesn't make it :confused: oooooh, spoilerz!

Wayne Drake
01-28-2008, 02:08 AM
Couple more pages. let me show you them.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/boxman_deluxe/038.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/boxman_deluxe/039.jpg

N8B!
01-28-2008, 03:22 AM
Clean work yo, but where is it all taking place, you definitely should throw in some more BG's so's we's can tell where its all goin down...

N8B!

Wayne Drake
01-28-2008, 08:50 PM
thanks, man :) Yeah, there seems to be a lot of nothing going on behind my pages. I'm thinking about filling it in with brick walls an steam pipes.

payon23
01-31-2008, 04:12 PM
Looking good Wayne.

I dig your stuff.

Are you going to be publishing the finished version?

-P-

Wayne Drake
01-31-2008, 06:42 PM
Looking good Wayne.

I dig your stuff.

Are you going to be publishing the finished version?

-P-

yeah, i want to but i'll probly try the online thing first. kind of like myspace-darkhorse presents style. we'll see

cray55
02-01-2008, 05:56 PM
You need to work on your back grounds to really add depth to your pages. The backgrounds are completely empty, and I as a viewer can't tell what kind of enviroment they are in. You also need to work on drawing action/ fight scenes. We never even see the characters touch each other. If you skip right away to the next scene with a character on the ground, you will loose the interest of the reader, and the story becomes less fluent. But your characterization is good, and you have something o work with.

Wayne Drake
02-01-2008, 06:40 PM
I'm thinking of a splash page to show him socking the other guy. But i'm also trying to be very subtle, it's a children;s book :har:

xombey
02-01-2008, 06:55 PM
i love these, except for the last panel on pg 2.

also, because the bad guy had the syringe in his rgt hand, sc should have gotten it on the lft side of his neck.

Wayne Drake
02-01-2008, 06:59 PM
i love these, except for the last panel on pg 2.

also, because the bad guy had the syringe in his rgt hand, sc should have gotten it on the lft side of his neck.

You mean cuz of the jugular vein? I guess I can fix that too

xombey
02-02-2008, 03:29 AM
no.

unless i read wrong, bad guy's laying on his back w/syringe in rgt hand. sc stands over him facing him. if bad guy stabs at his neck he's stabbing from his rght to his lft, hitting sc on the left.

Wayne Drake
02-02-2008, 04:46 PM
oh, Spy Crusher takes it and injects himself. It'll read better with the balloons ;)