Flash: Gathered Intelligence

[joeyjarin]

Title: Flash: Gathered Intelligence
Writer: Ugga Bugga
Artist: Joe Jarin

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[joeyjarin]

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[d_art]

i like the writing and the pace.

[William Blankenship]

Interesting stuff, I like the pacing as well.

[TomPettyIsGod]

Nice progression with good transitioning. Very well done.

[joeyjarin]

Thanks :)

[vator69]

has a really nice flow to it,

[Lord Fejj]

Nice! The color seems a little saturated, it might look good to tone it down a bit, esp. the backgrounds, this could help give it more depth.

[joeyjarin]

Nice! The color seems a little saturated, it might look good to tone it down a bit, esp. the backgrounds, this could help give it more depth.

You're right about the color. I'll tone it down a bit. Less is more :)

Thanks for all the comments.

[Comics Commando]

Missing lots of commas, which pulls me out of the reading experience.