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Fred Duran
07-31-2007, 04:16 PM
Hey everybody. I usually hang around the Writing board (and Chit-Chat - VIVA LA PAY!), but I'm starting a webcomic called My Name is Fred (I'll put a link in the Pimping section when it goes online), and wanted to see what I could improve on. I'm a writer by trade, but I've been encouraged to try my hand at drawing, so this is a learning experience for me, so please tell me everything that I can do. Oh and the lettering is going to be redone in caps and made bigger too, so ignore that please.
Anyway, the page:
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a307/cupil711/MyNameisFredweek2.jpg

Thanks,

Fred

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Fred Duran- Creator/Writer/Madman (http://fduranwriting.bravehost.com)
ComicSpace (http://www.comicspace.com/cupil711)
Do you need a writer? Do you know how I can get into contact with the artist known as Ronald Schell? EMAIL ME (please)! (fduran2@gmail.com)
Be on the lookout for my upcoming weekly webcomic, My Name is Fred (link to be added when it goes live)