New X-Men ( test failed... )

[RRicardo]

:cry: ...
Hi, My friends,
These are 6 pages, produced for a test that failed. I believe that these pages were not very good. but I leave here as a register, thus I can read the critical ones, to perfect me more professionally and to follow my dreams.

Thanks. :) :)

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n299/betapunho/testes%20diversos/pagina-1.jpg

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n299/betapunho/testes%20diversos/pagina2.jpg

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n299/betapunho/testes%20diversos/pagina3.jpg

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n299/betapunho/testes%20diversos/pagina4.jpg

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n299/betapunho/testes%20diversos/pagina5.jpg

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n299/betapunho/testes%20diversos/pagina6.jpg

[jakebilbao]

dude, could you post the script for this?

[RRicardo]

dude, could you post the script for this?

Ok, however, script that I received is in Portuguese. I am happy that it has visited this topic, therefore I admire its work very and I always have it as a reference for me. Thanks a lot. But if thus to prefer, I will be able to leave here link for download of this script.

excuse me my horrible english...

[RRicardo]

Jake, this is script that I received (in Portuguese, in pdf format):
http://www.4shared.com/file/18759552/93e06b4c/sequentialstudios_roteiro_newx-men.html

[peruzzo]

I like these, but part of the problem I have is being able to understand what is happening in some of the panels. I think it has to do with your use of blacks. In many of the pages, your blacks create a patchwork-like effect, making things hard to distinguish. I suggest you really concentrate on one light source and put all of your shadows/blacks opposite it. This should help render your figures with more readability. I think you are on the right track though.

[macho]

yeah i agree...there's too much scattered shadow. i have the same problem, and its taken me a while to adjust but to much shadowing will just muttle the pages. try pooling your shadows and not breaking them up so much. also dont black out so many of the backrounds, i think throwing in some full backrounds would have added alot here.
otherwize this stuff is really great :kewl:

[RRicardo]

Thanks for comments, peruzzo and macho. Thanks!
:) :) :)

[Soulless MW]

Not bad. There is a lot of things to work on. But thats with anyones work. I see a lot of great pencil work coming from you. Heck I would even work with you. Check out my company.

www.mortalworldentertainment.net

[RRicardo]

Not bad. There is a lot of things to work on. But thats with anyones work. I see a lot of great pencil work coming from you. Heck I would even work with you. Check out my company.

www.mortalworldentertainment.net


Thanks for the words Soulless. I am contented. I am ready, without a doubt.
Kord & Harley and Soulless is very very cool. Congratulations.

Best.