avengers

[rodrigo]

avengers

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http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p253/rodrigo_064/Avengers.jpg

[Blind Master]

It's the old... New Avengers! I love the Iron Man and Spider-Woman but Cap's head looks funny.

[HaphazardJoy]

Pretty cool! Lots of fun and some great detail.

Cap's head does look a little funny, but I think it's mostly just his ears being so big. Thor looks a little goofy, what's up with his boots, and his helmet could use the trademark wings to even it out. Also, the shadowing in Thor doesn't seem to match the rest of the piece (which is otherwise quite excellently done btw). Judging on the other characters and according to the shadow cast by the skyscraper to the left on the second skyscraper, I don't get why Thor's front, and such large areas of his cape are blacked out. Spider-man and Wasp almost seem like afterthoughts. Obviously Wasp is small for a reason, but Spider-man is also small and Wasp could be placed differently in the composition to make her more apparent. I didn't even notice her until I looked at the image a second time, and maybe it'd be cool to have her be so secondary in a sequential, but for a splash/poster comp it doesn't make sense.

[evolver]

this is cool and very detailed .. I'd give Thor his helmet wings though,

who's foot is under iron man? I'm guessing it's supposed to be cap's..doesn't quite line up from my perspective..

the background looks cool..


this is a nice picture but when i looked at it just seems off..teetering on the cusp of pro level work, but still a little wonky with your composition and proportions..


nice job!

[rodrigo]

thanks,

It's hard to realize that after all the work I've made so many mistakes....
thanks for pointing them out, so I can improve my art.

[HaphazardJoy]

Yeah man, that's the point though, to improve and continue to get better! You're off to a great start, and keep that in mind when you get criticism.

[Excalibur14]

Really cool. You definately captured each character well. Some little things about perspective seems off to me, but then again..I have the same problems lol..

Still an incredible piece. Awesome.

[rodrigo]

Hi guys,

I've made some little changes...

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p253/rodrigo_064/avengers_01.jpg

[tsilvers]

I think it's a very good piece. My eye was draw immediately to Iron Man, which you did a fabulous job with. Cap's face looked a little odd, but it wasn't something that jumped out at me. Very good work! I would love to see more.

[rodrigo]

I think it's a very good piece. My eye was draw immediately to Iron Man, which you did a fabulous job with. Cap's face looked a little odd, but it wasn't something that jumped out at me. Very good work! I would love to see more.


Hey,

I´ve changed cap face from the first pic... but if it still odd... I´ve must have had do it wrong...

thanks for the crit anyway....

[Blind Master]

Hey,

I´ve changed cap face from the first pic... but if it still odd... I´ve must have had do it wrong...

thanks for the crit anyway....


No I think fixing Cap's ears improved it a lot.

[joshm]

It seems to have the feeling that everyone was drawn separately and then light boxed in. I'm not sure if you did this or not, but I think you might be better off spending more time on the layout and design then the overall style and appearance. That's sounds kind of odd, but when something is rendered very well, as this piece is, it can show mistake through very easily. You have a lot of talent and your hard work shows. Keep it up!