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06-05-2007, 07:22 PM
Here are some sample pages I just finished. I hope you all like. =)
06-05-2007, 08:59 PM
Is that Molly from RUNAWAYS?
06-05-2007, 09:53 PM
:w00t: HA! I like it! Molly's a little stiff looking in the last full page shot, but otherwise those're some damn fine pencils!
06-05-2007, 10:48 PM
Page 1 has a couple of issues. The most relevant information is in panel 3 and it's the smallest panel on the page. The explosive "money shot" should be big, to get the maximum impact. It doesn't help that panels 1 and 2 are on the bland side. Panel 2 should really feature the bank more prominently, and I'd try for a more interesting camera angle. Panel one seems to be showing us a specific grouping of bulidings, but the plotting indicates we should be seeing a more generic looking establishing city shot.
Things get a whole lot better once your characters begin appearing.(a reward for continued scrolling I'd call it :)) They look good, and the appearance of Molly is inspired. I'd only suggest making Rhino's downward glance a little more clear.
06-06-2007, 05:44 AM
wow, cooool drawings!
not sure about the first page, because panel 1 and 2 donīt seem to be very connected to the story.
but i like everything else!
who is this big guy, saw him so many times in spiderman-comics but donīt know his name.
06-06-2007, 05:48 AM
Thanks for the comments and crits.
JR- Yes that's Molly.
Seb-Thanks for crit.
Sherzo-Thanks for crits.
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