Marvel Sample Pages

[csyeung]

Here are some sample pages I just finished. I hope you all like. =)

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs17/f/2007/156/9/3/MPS_001_by_Csyeung.jpg
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs16/f/2007/156/6/0/MPS_002_by_Csyeung.jpg
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs17/f/2007/156/8/4/MPS_003_by_Csyeung.jpg
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs17/f/2007/156/6/5/MPS_004_by_Csyeung.jpg
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs16/f/2007/156/c/e/MPS_005_by_Csyeung.jpg

[JRCarter]

Not bad.

Is that Molly from RUNAWAYS?

[sebzero11]

:w00t: HA! I like it! Molly's a little stiff looking in the last full page shot, but otherwise those're some damn fine pencils!
Great job!

[scherzo]

Page 1 has a couple of issues. The most relevant information is in panel 3 and it's the smallest panel on the page. The explosive "money shot" should be big, to get the maximum impact. It doesn't help that panels 1 and 2 are on the bland side. Panel 2 should really feature the bank more prominently, and I'd try for a more interesting camera angle. Panel one seems to be showing us a specific grouping of bulidings, but the plotting indicates we should be seeing a more generic looking establishing city shot.

Things get a whole lot better once your characters begin appearing.(a reward for continued scrolling I'd call it :)) They look good, and the appearance of Molly is inspired. I'd only suggest making Rhino's downward glance a little more clear.

-Mark

[Arne S.]

wow, cooool drawings!

not sure about the first page, because panel 1 and 2 don´t seem to be very connected to the story.

but i like everything else!

who is this big guy, saw him so many times in spiderman-comics but don´t know his name.

[csyeung]

Thanks for the comments and crits.

JR- Yes that's Molly.

Seb-Thanks for crit.

Sherzo-Thanks for crits.

Arne-That's Rhino!