Jla 1 finished and 2 roughs

[young-sedat]

Hey Everybody,
this is some of the new stuff im working on, since the wolverine script I worked on was really annoying, I thought it wouldbe better to work on something I enjoy.
Hope you all like it.
Advice and C&C is pretty welcome,
Sedat
Page2 rough version
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1077/526868097_d3e9f5df00_o.jpg
Page 8 rough version
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1130/526868095_de35b66f70_o.jpg
Page 8 fin:
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1236/526868087_d52f8c004c_o.jpg

And dont forget to check my blog
http://sedatoezgen.blogspot.com

[Arne S.]

hey sedat,

coole sachen, du hast wirklich was drauf!
pg 2: cooler roboter und gute bewegungen, nix zu kritisieren!
pg 8: irritiert etwas, da superman und wonderwoman sehr realistisch rüberkommen, der fliegende rechts oben und batman eher nach funny-style aussehen.
deine detailarbeit ist super!
alles gute,
-arne

[young-sedat]

hey Arne,
vielen Dank freut mich dass dir die Seiten gefallen.
also ich hatte versucht, die Figuren im Hinter und Vordergrund gleichmäßig stark zu machen, wo bei ich bei denen im Vordergrund auf viele Details verzichtet habe um nicht alle Aufmerksamkeit auf sie zu ziehen. Aber das mit dem Funnystyle war aber nicht absichtlich :)

Alles Gute,
Sedat

[PeterDuvalle]

This is very detailed and has an awesome dynamic feel to it, it would also be nice if you could translate what you guys said to english lol :har:

[j giar]

You robotic work is exceptional...kinda reminds me of The Iron Giant...But oddly enough I would have liked to have seen the completed page 2...more so than the action or group shot..Still, really good work though. Jim

[young-sedat]

Hey Guys,
man I was thinking that this post got lost under all the other posts Ive seen recently here (there was a lot of awesome stuff).
@Peter,
Arne told me, that he liked page 2, but he thinks page 8 is a little bit confusing because WW and Superman seem to be drawn more realistic than Batman and Martian Manhunter and I told him that I tried to add not too much details to the characters in the foreground to have the viewers attention not only on them... and leting the other characters disappear.
Thanks for the nice words :)

@Jgiar,
thanks Im glad you like the robot. although I dont have the finished version of page 2 uploaded yet, I thought I could upload the finished version of the prelim. I think I will upload all pages at all when thyre finished. Sadly I have to work on a graphik novel (esque thing) at the moment too (for school). That means two projects, and both are very important...its kind of hard. Hope youll enjoy and thanks for the nice words.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1030/532275233_8d6e3e4dd2_o.jpg

btw If you guys want to check some more stuff, feel free to visit my blog, I appricciate every single visitor.
Sedat
http://sedatoezgen.blogspot.com

[jimmybott]

Some awesome stuff. reminds me a little bit of Lienil Yu.
The only things I think could be better are supermans face on the splash page and batmans pose same page. They both look a little rushed.

Also, have you thought about maybe using non-repro blue pencil for your perspective and roughing in? I would help to produce cleaner pencils (but the waxier pencils can effect your inks).

[young-sedat]

Hey Jimmy,
thanks man! Leinil is one of my favourite artists, along with Travis Charerst, jim Lee, Adam Hughes and many more. Im still not sure if Ill use the splash page or not since its the last page and hasnt that much importance for the story.

I actually use non repro blue, the scan just makes em gray. some long time ago, I used them on the finished pages, but sometimes when everything goes bad it happens that I scrw a good page becuase of one bad panel or so. thats why I prefer drawing it on a scrap page and the light box it. all in all I usually finish a page that way in 10hrs (penciling and tracing). I really prefer that, although I have to say that the finished pages sometimes lose a little bit of their dynamic.
thanks for the nice words again :)

Sedat
http://sedatoezgen.blogspot.com

[thejudge2000]

This is some killer stuff man, your robot is just killer!!!! :kewl: :banana: :thumbs: Did you write your own script for this pages?...just curious

[Splash!]

Incredible job as always!!!

[Fletch]

Like the look of the robot. Very cool feel to it.

[hlbimages]

Very nice job on the penciling. I hope you got yourself a good inker and colorist.

[xombey]

that stuff ids great.

i went on your blog and there's even better stuff there. what schoo are you in that you're doing a graphic novel for class?

[young-sedat]

hey guys,
thanks for the nice words everybody. Ive been drawing some new stuff, which will be up later today.

@thejudge2000,
thanks for the nice words. I didnt write the script, a friend of mine wrote it for me. he is very talented.

@splash,
thanks Im glad you enjoy these :)

@Fletch,
thanks alot. Ive tried to give the robot some of that retro look

@hlbimages,
thanks, these are going to stay pencils only, because theyre supposed to be sample pages for SDCC, but anyone who wants to ink someting is welcome :D

@xombey,
thanks for the nice words. Im visiting the university of applied science of Design in Münster, Germany. Its actually more a school for designer, though we have an illustartion class but its not like in the states where you learn a lot. Most of the stuff you see up here is selftaught. We actually get feedback from our teacher and thats about it ;)

All the best,
Sedat
http://sedatoezgen.blogspot.com

[Tristan Vick]

People keep asking for the script, so I posted it over in the Writers Forum. It's called "JLA: Mechancial Mayhem" Or just click HERE (http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1213879#post1213879) for the link.

Pika! :whistlin:

[dano]

i LIKE IT A LOT!

[thall838]

awesome pages :kewl: !!

[JeffW.]

Man, these are great! Just as good as some pros that I've seen.

[sevans]

Those are very strong pages.
I would buy artwork like this!
Love the robots and the superman pose.

[peruzzo]

strong work. One critique for you. In page 2 bottom panel. The robot's arm is extremely close to the panel border. It almost looks like the robot is trying to avoid hitting it. you might just want to make some of the arm going off panel. otherwise everything else looks really great.

[j giar]

Sedat...stopped by your blog. It's an impressive body of work. And you draw one of the most grittiest versions of Batman I've seen in a long time. You can have your overrendered Jim Lee Batman look. Yours kicks serious ass. Nice work ,man.

[young-sedat]

long time no see...
Ive been actually working hard within the last few days, but sadly also had some reallife issues that I had to get rid off. However, I havent been working on the script during the last days, because I had to work on a schoolproject (which Ill upload soon too).

@Tristan,
thanks :D

@Dano, glad you like it

@Thall838, thanks for the nice words

@Jeff, thanks a lot Im glad that you enjoy these, Im not sure if theyre on a pro level, but I think Ill find out at SDCC :)

@Seavans, Im glad you enjoyed these so much. Ive actually never done any commissions yet, but in case you should be interested, then let me know. I guess Ill need some money after SDCC.

@Peruzzo, your crit is true. WHen I drew the Robot I kind of misplaced him. But as you can see below in the finishd version I got rid of that layout problem in there. Thank you for your kind words :)

@J giar, first of all thanks for checking my blog! I really appricciate every visitor and every person to post a comment (it means a lot to me!). Im glad to hear that you like the way I draw Batman...I find it very hard to draw him, because hes such an Iconic Character who has been recreated so often, by so many talented people, that it can be very hard to make him outstanding :)

Heres the finished version of page 2
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1102/566654545_d9cb87fb42_o.jpg
As soon as the semester is over Ill be able to commit myself 100% to these pages again and pump some good artwork out...hopefully :D

Dont forget http://sedatoezgen.blogspot.com

All the best,
Sedat

[Justice41]

That came out great man. It didn't lose any of it's umphhh in the rendering.

[Ravencore]

holy crap almighty these are inspirational. Great freekin stuff. simply fan-freekin-tastic

[Multisync143]

Are you working for the Big Two? Freakin' Amazing! Only problem i see is that the size of the Robots changes on one page he/she/it is about four people tall and about two wide. So for the splash Batman is either very tiny or the robots got a lot bigger.

[Splash!]

Looking great Sedat!!!! Looking Great!

[thestranger]

Really nice work. You really lay down texture and space well. My only crit would be on your splash page. You might want to consider slightly thickening the oulines on Superman and Wonder Woman to bring them forward in space a little more.

[Kunslier]

First off, let me say that your work is simply amazing. If you're not working as a profession artist in this field, you should be. I do have one question/comment about the last panel though. Are the drawings of all three people running away from the robot the same person? If so, you may want to have the first two lighted up a bit to give the illusion of motion. Just a suggestion. Looking forward to seeing more. :happy:

[Arne S.]

kann mich nur anschliessen, sehr cool!

[Tristan Vick]

Yeah, what Arne S. said. Very cool dude! :cool:

Pika!

[Radiophonicus]

I don't suppose you could send me a high res copy of the pencils to radiophonicus(at)yahoo.com? I'd like to ink these.

[young-sedat]

hey everybody,
sorry for the late reply Ive been working on some illustrated stuff, that Ill upload soon.

@Justice,thank you, glad you like the tight rendered stuff as much as the prelim. Im usually afraid that during the tracing level all the power gets lost.

@Ravencore, thaaannnk-youuuu :D Im glad you find em inspirational

@Multisync143,thanks for the nice words. Sadly Im not working for any publisher. the size is changing because the script says that on page 7 bigger and different robots invade Metropolis. i didnt want to do any new designs so I just came up with a bigger version of the first robot.

@Splash, thank you, glad you like em:)

@the stranger, thank you man. I agree on the thicker outlines I iwll give them another shot ;)

@Kunslier, thank you for your very kind words. Yes its supposed to be Jimmy olsen in the last panel running away (he looks a lot like me with blonde hair :D) I actually didnt know how to create the illusion of him running in multible-motion so I thought this would be the best way to show it.

@Arne.S, danke danke :)

@Tristan, danke danke :D

@Radiophonicus, thanks I will send you a high resolution scan asap, ok?
but please let me know as soon as you have it inked id love to see it.

thanks a lot everybody for the nice comments.
All the best,
Sedat

http://sedatoezgen.blogspot.com

[Radiophonicus]

@Radiophonicus, thanks I will send you a high resolution scan asap, ok?
but please let me know as soon as you have it inked id love to see it.

thanks a lot everybody for the nice comments.
All the best,
Sedat

http://sedatoezgen.blogspot.com

I'll surely post a pic as soon as I have them done. Thanks a ton.

[young-sedat]

ok, after having finished my other project for school, I finally had time to work on these pages again. the last panel will looks different though, because im not very happy with it...lets see what happens :=)
Hope you all enjoy! feedback is very welcome,
Sedat
http://sedatoezgen.blogspot.com
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1302/740299180_1a5eaddc81_o.jpg

[The Dag]

is flash really strong enough to rip a giant robots arm off?

[Multisync143]

I don't think he could carry the robot arm either. Just change him into superman. :)

[Ravencore]

maybe thats superman wearing the flash's costume because his is at the cleaners.

sorry

anyway this stuff is so awesome

[jgmcomics]

Very nice seq's.

[Arne S.]

woooow, this 2nd panel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

blos die pespektive der häuser im ersten panel stimmt nicht ganz, jedenfals ein anderer winkel als im zweiten panel (die rechte seite, die nach hinten wegfluchtet)

aber das zweite panel ist großartig!

[young-sedat]

@all,
thanks for the feedback :)

@the dag,
just think of a bullet thats being fired from a gun. a bullet is really small, but the speed with which it is being fired up makes it deadly. Now think of something that has the size of a man and is even 5 times faster than a bullet...if that colliedes with something it surely would crash it. and then again its just a comic, those are guys wearing masks and wearing spandex :)

@Multisync143,
if youll read the script which has been posted in this thread too, youll understand the joke behind the whole thing ;)

@Ravecores,
:D thanks, Im glad you enjoy the page

@jgmcomics,
thank you man :)

@Arne,
hast recht ich werde dan Hintergrund im Panel nochmal zeichnen und neu einfügen. Danke freut mich sehr dass es dir gefällt:)

all the bes,
Sedat
http://sedatoezgen.blogspot.com