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Imboden
05-23-2007, 04:36 PM
Let's hear it, folks.

And yeah, iffin you want to talk about 'Crazy Mary' since she was in this issue, you can do it here as well.
Mike225
05-24-2007, 01:10 AM
I saw that the book went on sale today, but when do the subscriptions get sent out?
L Jamal
05-24-2007, 01:53 AM
I read mine last night while I was at the store and bought it today and now I want to know more about FoJ2
secondrater
05-24-2007, 07:36 AM
waiting for my sub issue. I'll leave a little review then!
eDuke
05-24-2007, 01:17 PM
I'm hoping to get sub copies out tomorrow, if not, next week definitely!
Calloway
05-29-2007, 11:55 PM
Story was great! I'm really frustrated at not having an answer to the other fist yet!

The inking was the worst part (if it's ok to dissect it). Looked more like level adjusts on pencils then inking.

Crap I wish fist had more pages.
eDuke
05-30-2007, 11:19 AM
Bingo! Pencils were level adjusted. Answer to FOJ2 is revealed in the next chapter and I bet it'll come as a shock to everyone. :D
secondrater
05-30-2007, 01:07 PM
Got my copy today! Sweet!
I really liked this issue, but I agree a bit about the inking. There were some places where it worked better than others. The rest was great though, each issue seems to be better than the last.
those preview pencils for next issue (or rather FOJ/DPW #36) look fantastic.
cheers
Imboden
05-30-2007, 01:44 PM
If we were monthly the mystery behind "FoJ2" wouldn't be so bad. I mean, it's not like we're doing Hobgoblin or anything! :laugh:

Just don't over-think it. That's all I'm gonna say.
L Jamal
05-30-2007, 02:47 PM
It is the bastard son of FOJ and Amy from an alternate future that came back in time only to see Amy killed and his future in jeopardy. Rather than attempt to travel back further in time to right the wrong (Amy's death), he's decided to usurp and desecrate the identity of the father who never knew he existed.

Or you can use the "JMS method" and make him the age accelerated son of Amy and Dibuk from when Amy went on sabbatical to Tibet.
Imboden
05-30-2007, 02:54 PM
Yeah.

Time to hit the PC for some re-writes. Damn Jamal, spoiling our story!
L Jamal
05-30-2007, 03:13 PM
Damn Jamal, spoiling our story!
Sorry, but the plot was just soooo obvious :rolleyes: :laugh: :)
Paul Sanderson
05-31-2007, 01:17 AM
Or you can use the "JMS method" and make him the age accelerated son of Amy and Dibuk from when Amy went on sabbatical to Tibet.

Ouch! :laugh:

Imby...no matter what happens, never ever go JMS on me! ;)
Imboden
06-02-2007, 03:31 PM
Don't worry - nothing like that planned here.