Pages for indy Space comic

[Unifiedshoe]

These are some pages for a mini-comic I was working on in 1999. Just ran across them and thought I'd put them up. I was planning on adding sound effects and text but never got around to it.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/unifiedshoe/shoutpg1.jpg
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/unifiedshoe/shoutpg2.jpg
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/unifiedshoe/shoutpg3.jpg
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/unifiedshoe/shoutpg4.jpg
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/unifiedshoe/shoutpg5.jpg

[Unifiedshoe]

No crits? I was hoping to hear something back as I haven't shown my art in years and have never had any decent criticism.

[jbot]

i'm not diggin' the guy and the ship too much, but i really like the backgrounds(especially the stacked rocks).

[MrGranger]

Yeah...that would be my comment. Though he might grow on ya. Kind of odd considering that I love the details of everything else.

[Unifiedshoe]

thanks for the input.

The thing I'm happiest with is the planets on the first page.

[Wayne Drake]

you might want to adjust the levels so the blacks are black and the whites are white.

[Unifiedshoe]

Asjust my scanner or adjust this post somehow? Either way, hardly think it matters, I dont think anyone else will be posting crits.

[Wayne Drake]

if you have photoshop or some kind of tool like that. it'll make your pages nice an crisp.

[Unifiedshoe]

Nothing like that, sorry. I actually had to photocopy and size down the pages before they would fit on my scanner. Pretty sad actually.