Batgirl revisited

[Cynron Rulon]

Hi everyone...I am the guy who keeps doing this Batgirl cover but can't get it the way I want it, by which I mean good. I've appreciated all the suggestions up til now and I think I've made some progress. Please continue with the comments and direction, thanks...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v503/Rulon/batgirl43-24copy.jpg

[OZ!]

OOOH!!! Finish it. This is gonna look great!

[sevans]

The pose and background elements remind me of a Frazetta layout.
Anything that reminds me of Frazetta MUST be finished! :slap:

[secret-identity]

If your aiming for a completely painting image in the way your going.. I'd say finish it and it's going to come out great. Get everyting crisp, and get ur tones on the hair, cape, rocks and background and whatnot and this is going to be the way you want it.







I, personally think, after the finishing adjustments, it'll look really great to me if it got outlined. I loooove inks on top of paints. :banana:

[Splash!]

Much, much better than the last one, You're headed in the right direction for sure!!!

[evolver]

looking good!

[Cynron Rulon]

This piece has been through many stages. I think I might have something worthy of calling finished, or maybe not, let me know.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v503/Rulon/loresbatgirl43-28.jpg

[Lord Fejj]

Really nice! Maybe her left arm is a little off at the sholder (?) (I'd have to see someone standing like that) I really like this, it might be stronger if she is standing on building ledges instead of rocks, but that's just me.

[Cynron Rulon]

I've made some adjustments, let me know hot or cold...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v503/Rulon/batgirl3-30.jpg

[INFINITEDREAMS]

Ilove the second to last one, the adjustments you made killed the bckgrnd in the last one. heres a tip that may work to richen up the "finished" one. Add a layer above all the paint and make it "overlay mode" take it down to 18 - 25% on opacity, and start painting in black, it richens every thing up. so be selective, it may help to even it all up. Nice job though :thumbs:

[The-Spirit]

Good work!

[xaltair]

I like the second last one too, but i don't like how her right thigh, the bent one looks like in any of them. Something is off there. :)