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algenous
03-25-2007, 11:55 AM
peeps,

here's my 3rd post for my practice...hope can get some words from you all...thanks for helping... :cool:


http://img471.imageshack.us/img471/2493/powergirlvp3.jpg


thanks for the artist..... :)


algenous

Splash!
03-25-2007, 01:34 PM
Looks really good!!

Necromancer XI
03-26-2007, 02:17 PM
i'm quite impressed actually!
the skin is good, i notice the shading from right to left on har, nice stuff
now the whole image seems too blue, now the white should normally have a slight blue grey as shading, try that out, and try changing the background to an orangy red, just to have some more contrast
well of course thats what i would do, but i doubt you'd want to color like me lol
peace
Ross

paul brian deberry
03-26-2007, 04:23 PM
looks great!!

algenous
03-27-2007, 10:06 AM
thanks.......

Miguel Marques
03-29-2007, 06:58 AM
Good work.
In my alone vision the color of the skin could get better with some pink tones.

algenous
03-29-2007, 08:01 PM
thank you....

im jsut a newby and that's my third piece and im getting inspired hearing from you.......


thanks man...



algenous

ena3comics
03-30-2007, 04:32 AM
hey, can you color some of my stuff!?

ena3comics
03-30-2007, 04:35 AM
heres a link to my spider man sketch if you could color it it would be awsome!

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c273/ena3comics/spiderman.jpg

bluepen
03-31-2007, 08:50 AM
Welcome to DW kabayan. You'll learn lot in this forum, just keep on practicing.

Ok, you asked my crits here it is,just add 2nd light source though you have it already... front and side... but the face, front shoulders, upper chest and right leg need a bit more light. that's all...

Enjoy coloring!