older piece looking for crits

[aerosoul]

this was an older piece i'd colored for infinity uprising, i never posted it because i was afraid to take crits for my colors.

but now...bring it on!

http://www.labldesign.com/art/222o.jpg
http://www.labldesign.com/art/222.jpg

note: i know there are some things in there that look a little muddy and blurry, but the editor's request were that some pieces of the art be "glowy" (his adjective) and wanted the colors to blur out of the outlines. you can see it in the zombie's arm and eyes, the chain, etc.

just my self-crit.

thanks!

[Miguel Marques]

I liked colors.
Only ta lacking some separations better of the vision plans. In my opinion.

[aerosoul]

I liked colors.
Only ta lacking some separations better of the vision plans. In my opinion.

can you expand on this? what do you mean by 'vision plans'?

[Miguel Marques]

See those examples; You separate and it focuses the readers' vision using the colors.
http://img164.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=68222_0_006g_123_176lo.jpg
http://img169.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=80488_pag_029aaaa_122_105lo.jpg

[aerosoul]

ah, i gotcha. kind of like depth of field. i never thought about that before, thanks!

[cryten]

Good to see you back around Steve!