Araña

[di.straido]

The pencils by Roberto Souzza.

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[BKMDog]

Generally good, although I think the background line work could be lighter to make it lay back more. Also: The big shot at the end where she kicks the guy - The line work on the guy getting kicked could be richer / deeper/ heavier, in order to pull him more into the foreground. Good clean line throughout.

[Thorcus]

Generally good, although I think the background line work could be lighter to make it lay back more. Also: The big shot at the end where she kicks the guy - The line work on the guy getting kicked could be richer / deeper/ heavier, in order to pull him more into the foreground. Good clean line throughout.

i agree with him and maybe you should add some shadows here and there - i know the pencler didn't but you could add it to give more deep - for example on the windows in panel 1 and 2. On her shoes in the last panel - i would add on
a site a thicker line - IMO - overall a nice page.

[di.straido]

Thorcus and BKMDog, thanks very very much for your tips... really, thanks!!!