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jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:05 PM
I'm fairly new around here. Been skulking and checking out people's work, but haven't commented much so far. I thought I'd just start one thread to post my art in rather than starting a new thread for each drawing.
So you're going to see some bad stuff that I did a while ago, and hopefully some better stuff as I have attempted to hone my skills. Please feel free to crit, comment, make fun or just stop by to say hi.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/therapy55.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/RAY55.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/foragervsdarkseid60.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:06 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/Juggernaut55.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/Warknight69.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/colossus50.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:07 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/GreenArrow50.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/Constantineinked50.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/ConstantineFinalNail42.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:08 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/GrendelRose40.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/GrendelnSpidey45.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/GrendelnPrime45.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:09 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/YoungJustice60.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/Daredevilwip.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/DDSIL50.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:10 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/Spectre.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/crybaby50.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/crybabycoloredsmall.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:11 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/typhoidcoloredSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/S-HAMblack60.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/YAWANTEDSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:12 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/YACOLOREDcopy.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/zatannacoloredSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/GLME1SMALL.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:13 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/SupesTAGSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/micospideyFINISHED1.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/vision60.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:14 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/CapBritcolored1.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/DC2Robin60.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/Wondergrls60.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:14 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/micospideyFINISHED2.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/UltimateSupermancolored1.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/LODmini.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:15 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/ultimatemartiancoloredsmall.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/ssovfinishedSmall.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/spiderhamrob60.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:16 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/hobgob60.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/samuraiinkedSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/samuraigreyscaleSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:17 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/TMNTCOLORSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludbloodinkedSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/Namorita60.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:18 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/BlackBludSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/LadyBludandShieBludSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/BloodyBludREDSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:18 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/shiebludrooftopSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/mrmysticpinupSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/BludyMarySmall.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:19 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludymaryinkedSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/darkseidSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/LordSorrowSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 04:20 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/cyclopsredSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/shie-pieSMALL.jpg
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/shiepieinkedletteredSMALL.jpg
xaltair
01-17-2007, 06:11 PM
Very very cool stuff. I like them all. You should join some of our draw-offs in the draw-off part of this site. We need more refreshing styles in there and more competition is always good.
Anyways, impressive stuff, keep posting. :har:
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 06:12 PM
Thanks, x.
Like I said, I'm new to the site and haven't had a chance to fully navigate around. I will definitely check it out.
Mwynn
01-17-2007, 06:14 PM
Sweet Bludblood.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludbloodinkedSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 06:32 PM
Sweet Bludblood.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludbloodinkedSMALL.jpg
Thanks!
That's actually the main character in a comic strip that I am working on. Hope to have it posted soon.
Saul Haber
01-17-2007, 09:05 PM
There is a hell of a lot of awesomeness in there. I give you credit for your attention to detail and the professional level of clarity and effort you put into your work. I especially liked the green lantern design, the black spider-pig (?), and the Ninja Turtle one (the best one you have up there, in my opinion). And humor is always appreciated. Keep up the good work!
The Anti-crest
01-17-2007, 09:12 PM
I like how you can do both very iconic work and very realistic work. The pictures that have the high level of attention to detail are most impressive.
jsalwen
01-17-2007, 09:35 PM
Thanks so much guys. Don't be afraid to rip apart my stuff either. I think I still have much to work on and I've always been decent at taking crits.
I'm trying to expand my work now so that I'm not doing the same static poses, so I will post those as I do them. Thanks again for the encouragement.
evolver
01-18-2007, 11:44 AM
the grendal - spidey watercooler scene made me fall out the chair!!
RavenBlakk
01-18-2007, 12:29 PM
A lot of really nice work there. Do you ink your own? I like your darker, gothic, violent stuff the best. It's all good but that seems to be where you tend gravitate. Good work.
Divad
01-18-2007, 12:49 PM
Your stuff isn't bad. There are some anatomical issues ( I am speaking in regards to the comic book stuff, not the cartoony stuff). Watch out for what I call bubble anatomy. You tend to give the muscles an inflated look. This is easily fixed by adding more straits and edges to the muscles rather than rounding off every corner. The good part is that there is a natural sense of movement in your pieces, which helps you avoid stiffness. Kepp up the good work.
jsalwen
01-18-2007, 03:40 PM
A lot of really nice work there. Do you ink your own? I like your darker, gothic, violent stuff the best. It's all good but that seems to be where you tend gravitate. Good work.
The stuff I've posted has all been done by me, so pencils, colors, and inks. I have stuff that people have colored for me, but I wanted to avoid posting them for the moment so that I didn't have to worry about citing each individual work. I will get around to them at some point.
Thanks for stopping by!
jsalwen
01-18-2007, 03:53 PM
Your stuff isn't bad. There are some anatomical issues ( I am speaking in regards to the comic book stuff, not the cartoony stuff). Watch out for what I call bubble anatomy. You tend to give the muscles an inflated look. This is easily fixed by adding more straits and edges to the muscles rather than rounding off every corner. The good part is that there is a natural sense of movement in your pieces, which helps you avoid stiffness. Kepp up the good work.
Thanks. I will keep your crits in mind.
jsalwen
01-20-2007, 05:34 AM
Here's a John Byrne Silver Surfer piece I inked.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/johnbyrnessinkedSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
01-21-2007, 02:00 PM
Hi all,
got some crits on creating more contrast on this pic, so I tweaked it a little.:)
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/johnbyrnessinkeddarkSMALL.jpg
xaltair
01-21-2007, 02:25 PM
Wow, and i can still barely see anything. :)
jsalwen
01-21-2007, 03:52 PM
Well, I really did want the Surfer to blend in, so I guess that's mission accomplished.
jsalwen
01-24-2007, 12:58 AM
Just a 5 minute sketch for an art thread.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/wevecomeSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
01-25-2007, 06:02 PM
Here's a new piece I'm working on.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/wonderwomanpissedSMALL.jpg
William Blankenship
01-25-2007, 08:36 PM
I LOLed at that Spidey/Grendel cartoon. Nice stuff all around.
3'LL
jsalwen
01-25-2007, 09:49 PM
Thanks!
SIN 78
01-26-2007, 05:34 PM
I especially like the Grendel pics, black Spider Ham, and the Nija Turtle, but the absolute best is the Wonder Woman pic. I took time to read the whole thing and it was hilarious! I'd like to see one of those with the Hulk.
jsalwen
01-26-2007, 06:29 PM
I especially like the Grendel pics, black Spider Ham, and the Nija Turtle, but the absolute best is the Wonder Woman pic. I took time to read the whole thing and it was hilarious! I'd like to see one of those with the Hulk.
Thanks, sin.
The Hulk huh? That would be cool. I've never really done a good Hulk piece. I may have to try that.
ChrisMcJunkin
01-26-2007, 07:28 PM
Blud Blood was friggin' hilarious. The obligatory cameos in the watercooler scene made me laugh as well.
Snowlock
01-26-2007, 07:52 PM
I'm a writer who is fairly new to the boards and I've been skulking around as well. I really like your pieces--especially the characters that you do with the swords. The Ninja Turtles piece (as others have said) is incredible!
What I really like about your work is that you show both the pencils and the inked work as well. That is very cool! :thumbs:
Keep up the good work!
Snowlock
jsalwen
01-26-2007, 09:31 PM
Thanks, Chris and Snow.
I should have Wonder Woman and a bunch of other pieces inked next week. I always appreciate you stopping by and taking a peek.
jsalwen
01-31-2007, 04:23 PM
Here's the Blud Blood comic strip week one: The God D@mn Blud Blood!
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/BBjimleecolorFINAL.jpg
hellblazer72
02-01-2007, 12:09 AM
blud blood is freakin hilarious with his tight pants...you have some cool stuff going on...i like the nova/ray and spidey/grendel cartoons, cool ray pic you should ink..the other grendel stuff is cool...is that constantine with the justice league behind him...i like your darker stuff better...
jsalwen
02-01-2007, 01:49 AM
Thanks, hell.
That is Constantine. Just a fun piece. I call it Constantine: The Final Nail.
jsalwen
02-02-2007, 02:13 AM
Here's the WW piece inked.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/WWinkedpissedSMALL.jpg
Azraelsos
02-02-2007, 02:43 PM
All you stuff is great I enjoy the difference between your works but this just made me laugh so freakin hard nice job. :happy:
Here's a new piece I'm working on.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/wonderwomanpissedSMALL.jpg
Jasen Smith
02-02-2007, 03:22 PM
Man thats great good fun stuff. It's hard to keep my interest in things..but I took a great look at all and gotta say I like your styles...Blud blood is great. Good sense of humor and great inking.
carriertone
02-02-2007, 04:29 PM
It's great to see Spider-Ham getting some love. Blud Blood is going to be the hottest new character in decades! Great stuff all around.
- C
jsalwen
02-03-2007, 12:12 AM
Thanks for taking the time to look and even more time to comment.
I'm always trying to improve because I'm never happy with what I put on paper.
Anyway, here's a piece I did for a Charlton Comics art contest. I hate it already, but I'm too busy and lazy to go back and fix it.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/charltoncoloredSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
02-03-2007, 04:31 AM
Here's a tryout piece I did for By the Blade. Inks by me.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bythebladetryoutSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
02-05-2007, 02:45 PM
The new Blud Blood thread is up on Newsarama.
It's week 2: Get some Blud on Your Hands!
Check it out if you have a minute:
http://forum.newsarama.com/showthread.php?t=100313
jsalwen
02-05-2007, 09:04 PM
Here's my Silver Centurion armor v2.0. I really hope I can get someone to color it. My paltry attempts kinda bring the piece down a little.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/silvercenturion2.jpg
Saul Haber
02-05-2007, 09:44 PM
That Silver Centurion is hot, man, but the colors are not too exciting. Give coloring a shot. You'll probably rock it. Be adventurous!
Good luck and great work!
jsalwen
02-05-2007, 09:54 PM
I don't have a tablet or anything. I have to do it using the pad on my laptop. That's what really holds me back from exploring coloring.
I should be picking up a Wacom tablet in the near future, but until then, my colors will look bland at best.
Saul Haber
02-06-2007, 06:30 PM
Is a Wacom tablet standard for coloring nowadays? I guess it would help.
xaltair
02-06-2007, 08:28 PM
Blud Blood rules. You should get a comicspace account and post him on there. :)
jsalwen
02-09-2007, 02:05 AM
I'm not aware of comcspace. What exactly can you do with it?
jsalwen
02-09-2007, 02:06 AM
Here is this week's pinup for Blud Blood.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/getsomebludredSMALL.jpg
And here's the sig the Scantronman from Newsarama was kind enough to make for me.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludsigcopyfh9.jpg
Lord Fejj
02-09-2007, 02:44 AM
Here's the WW piece inked.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/WWinkedpissedSMALL.jpg
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
This is the funniest sh!t I've read in a long time!!!! :banana:
jsalwen
02-09-2007, 04:48 AM
Thanks, Fejj. It was a pain to ink.:)
jsalwen
02-12-2007, 01:26 PM
Blud Blood Week 3 is up!
http://forum.newsarama.com/showthread.php?t=101167
jsalwen
02-13-2007, 05:23 PM
And here's the newest strip:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/BBPAAFINAL.jpg
jsalwen
02-13-2007, 07:11 PM
Here's a commission piece someone asked for.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/boosternovaSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
02-18-2007, 02:16 AM
Blud Blood: Reloaded.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludbloodRELOADEDINKEDSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
02-19-2007, 10:31 AM
Blud Blood Week 4 is up!
http://forum.newsarama.com/showthread.php?t=101967
jsalwen
02-21-2007, 03:50 AM
A couple more Blud Blood pieces.
Blud Blood versus Chapel!!!
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/BBvsChapelSMALL.jpg
Blud Blood: Reloaded Red
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludbloodRELOADEDREDSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
02-21-2007, 03:51 AM
Blud Blood versus Fozzie the Bear (after Frank Miller of course.)
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bbvsfozzieINKEDSMALL.jpg
di.straido
02-21-2007, 06:19 AM
Hi man, you draw alot hein??? Wow... hehehe!!!
I loved the toons... vety good!!!
Congrats
jsalwen
02-22-2007, 12:19 AM
Thanks!
jsalwen
02-26-2007, 12:51 PM
Here's the newest Blud Blood strip: In the LAND of Blud Blood.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/Inthelandcolored.jpg
Kal_EL
02-26-2007, 01:26 PM
I just read through this and I couldn't stop laughing. The nipple/diamond cutting part was the best. LOL :w00t:
Here's the WW piece inked.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/WWinkedpissedSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
03-05-2007, 04:13 PM
The new Blud Blood thread is up:
http://forum.newsarama.com/showthread.php?t=103852
jsalwen
03-06-2007, 11:49 PM
Some new pieces:
Colors by Paul Eckersley:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludblood1colorbypauleckersley.jpg
Colors by Ed Obomsawin:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludbloodcolorbyedobomsawinSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
03-06-2007, 11:54 PM
Colors by Ed Obomsawin:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bbvsfozzycolorlogobyedobomsawinSMAL.jpg
Pint size Avenger design for a friend:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/pintsizeinkedSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
03-06-2007, 11:54 PM
A glimpse of the future.;)
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludforcefinalSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
03-12-2007, 04:53 PM
Here's the new strip.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/BBfallenblud1FINAL.jpg
jsalwen
03-12-2007, 05:17 PM
That's right!!! This little character that started off as little more than a joke has already grown beyond my wildest expectations. I can't tell you how proud I am that we got this website launched. So come on over and take a look and tell us what you think.
http://www.bludblood.com/images/banner.gif
www.bludblood.com
Yup, it's real! We have been working like crazy to get this up and I love it! We've got so much more coming so stick around and help us get the word out. I don't think you'll be disappointed.;)
jsalwen
03-13-2007, 10:58 PM
This is colored by Chris J. Randolph. I hate the drawing I did, but Chris did a fantastic job on the colors.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/superbcolorpro2.jpg
jsalwen
03-19-2007, 04:13 PM
Hello all, the strip will be up later today. Jude and I had a slight miscommunication sending it back and forth, and he'll send me the finalized copy later on.
I'll take this time to make our big announcement.
Today we officially open the Blud Boards! Yep, we have our own forum now and we thought it would be a great way to have a dialogue with people out there. There's a dedicated art forum as well, so all you artists should definitely come by and help us build an artists's community.
As an added incentive, 5 of the first 50 people who sign up will be picked randomly by Jude and myself and will be immortalized in the Blud Blood Universe! Those 5 will have superheroes designed based on them and will join our hero in one of his future adventures! 1 of the 5 will also receive a drawing of themselves as their character from me!
So head on over to www.bludblood.com and become a part of our little world!:)
Here's the new strip:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/BBfallenblud2FINAL.jpg
jsalwen
03-19-2007, 10:05 PM
Here's a drawing I made for someone's sig for Blud blood's new forums.
Bludy Spirit.:)
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/bludyspiritinkedSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
03-26-2007, 12:58 PM
Here's Part 3 of the FALLEN BLUD SAGA! :)
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/BBfallenblud3FINAL.jpg
jsalwen
04-13-2007, 01:03 PM
Busy does not begin to describe my life right now, so I'm sorry I didn't post this earlier.
Here's the FINALE to the FALLEN BLUD SAGA!!!!!!(sort of).:)
http://www.bludblood.com/images/jalb_strip8.jpg
W. Smith
04-13-2007, 02:27 PM
Interesting stuff
I liked the vision coming through the wall, the DDSIL of daredevil and foes, The DC2Robin was okay and the ...iebludsmall looked like something stolen from Rob Liefeld's early sketch book (he really hasn't changed or improved all that much but we'll give him the benefit of the doubt)
:D
W. Smith
04-13-2007, 02:35 PM
missed a bunch of stuff just saw the first page...
jsalwen
04-14-2007, 12:11 PM
Thanks, W.
I think my style has changed significantly over the past few months and I have a lot of work to post, but it's 11x17, and I don't have my new scanner yet.
Check back soon.:)
jsalwen
04-17-2007, 01:23 AM
Been a little while since I really posted some work. Work gets posted here so quickly and then it's on the 5th page a day later that it's a bit hard to keep up.
I wish I had more time to participate more fully around here, but alas, that's not possible at the moment.
I will just have to settle for posting work as often as I can.
Ronin:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/roninprofilepencilsSMALL.jpg
Lady Blud:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/ladybludprofilepencilsSMALL.jpg
Kronos:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/kronosprofilepencilsSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
04-17-2007, 01:24 AM
Black Jack:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/blackjackinkedSMALL.jpg
Invincible versus Blud Blood:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/invinvsBBinkedSMALL.jpg
Optimus Prime:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/optimusprimeSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
04-17-2007, 01:26 AM
And here's 3 winners from bludblood.com !!!
I designed characters for each of them.:)
Fallen:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/FallenprofileSMALL.jpg
Sinder:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/SinderprofileSMALL.jpg
Cowstar:
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h235/jsalwen/cowstarprofileSMALL.jpg
jsalwen
05-02-2007, 05:33 PM
Should I just forget about this art dump and post pieces individually?
I'm not complaining or anything, but is it intimidating for people to comment when there are a ton of pieces?
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