pencil practice!

[salvador raga]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f197/salvadorraga/sal.jpg
thank's for youre c&c :banana:

[Lord Fejj]

I like this, except for her left eye, I think it's a little crooked. I really like the armor! Shouldn't she have a belly button

[sevans]

I think that the armour top and the belt buckle (unless it belts not centred) are also skewed - off balance. If I ran an imaginary centre line down her torso, the top would be turned abit more to her right.

Nice pencil rendering though.

[salvador raga]

thank you for youre opinion, I try to improve my style.

[scherzo]

The lines and rendering are good. hairline on top looks a bit odd. almost like she's wearing a hairnet.(NEVER put warrior chicks in charge of french fries) I feel like I should be able to see her navel but I suppose some kind of fabric could be covering.

-Mark

[salvador raga]

thank's for your comments. :rolleyes: