MARDI GRAS art... wip

[evolver]

here's a painting i've been working on for a few days..i'm a little more than halfway done. what do you think?


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v484/kaine420/P1010546.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v484/kaine420/P1010550.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v484/kaine420/P1010548.jpg

[JonHParrish]

Where are the drunk chicks flashing for beads ?

Just wondering.

Seriously though, it's a nice piece.

[evolver]

Thanks! I Have Some Planned Revisions I'll Post Later Tonight.

[evolver]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v484/kaine420/jao007.jpg

[sevans]

The excessive amount of white is killing the piece for me. White sparkling highlights, OK, but big bold white halo around the entire face, too much.
Plus, All the white is reducing the richness of the surrounding colours.

[xaltair]

I agree with the too much white comment, also need more boobies and more beads. :bounce:

[evolver]

thanks for the comments guys


i wanted the picture to look like it was coming out of the purple picture .i'm painting the frame on the canvas and the feathers ,the left side of the hat ,part of the cup will break the borderand cast shadows.
i think the white halo will pull things together towards the end
i guessss we'll see
i wrote all that on the 2nd picture i know it's messy