Ex-Girlfriend sketch

[albone]

This is a WIP of my protagonist's ex-girlfriend. Before I keep going with it, I thought I'd see if there were any comments or concerns with it.

http://www.workshedstudio.com/images/hold/Brittany_sketch.jpg

[FeelnMe]

:banana: i'm sorry she's your ex! what did you say her number was :whistlin:

[FeelnMe]

oh, not your ex! does she still have a number :whistlin:

[William Blankenship]

This is good. It looks as if you have an understanding of anatomy, but you need to work on your clothing and folds. You can find alot of andrew loomis PDF's online (for free as they are out of print) and he's an excellent teacher when it comes to clothing folds and illustration all together.

3'LL

[albone]

FeelnMe-I'll see if I can get that to you. :P I take it you like? lol

3'LL-Yeah, clothing and folds. I was trying to tackle it head on, and I'm sure I'll be better for it in the future. I have the Loomis pdf, I'll take a good look at it, the next time I tackle it. Thanks for the comments!

[salvador raga]

My only comment is about the hands, it needs a little more work.

[Lord Fejj]

I think her right hand and her left leg need a little tweaking. Good job!