Princess Leia

[RAMolinelli]

Something I'm working on for fun inbetween Projects and commissions. Not done yet with Pencils wanted to show the class.

http://www.myonlineimages.com/members/MankindRam/images/P0.Leia.jpg

[evolver]

really clean, nice hair muffins.. but why is there a hand coming out her booty?..lol....were you originally going to draw her programming r2?(it looks like the booty hand is where it would be if she were kneeling down and that's what it reminded me of.. :thumbs:

[sevans]

Nice clean style and great working on the flowing fabric. Plus she looks much nicer and curvier than Ms Fisher.

The gun needs to be seperated from the background, the 'things' on the wall are rendered the same as the gun. Perhaps lighten the shadow/contrast in the background. This is the only minor nitpick that I can see.

[dano]

I like it!! :kewl:

[Screeny]

Two words - yum and yummy - great work.

[Cat]

um..Rich..sorry to tell you this but Leia's ears..don't show. the hairbuns cover them. Otherwise..nice pic!

[xaltair]

Very nice top...and very nice bottom too, i'm guessing her skirt won't stay see through would it? It would certainly explain how she can escape all the imperial forces though. :blink:

[Don.Edwards]

Man, I am digging that pic.

Nice and clean, very stylish and just all around kick ass. I don't really see any room for improvement here, except a smoking gun?? I dunno. I gotta say...I really like this pic a lot.

She's cute.

Keep it up.

D

[jedipencil]

I've said it before, Rich, but you are the master of folds! :thumbs:

[disgruntledfanboy]

very nice! :)

[Fresco]

Nice pic... I know it wasn't intentional, but fun see-through effect happening on the toga...

toga! toga! toga!

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b353/BLAZORD/3631tits.gif

hah... the things we find on myspace...
let's get back to our regularly scheduled programming...

back to the drawing...
I dare you to stop looking at the animation-- stop looking at it dammit
back to the drawing I say--
I especially like the linework in the hair.
well done dude!!!

:bounce:

[RAMolinelli]

Great Googly Moogly!

evolver - :laugh: Don't worry it will make sense soon enough!

sevans - yeah I totally agree. As I said though still a WIP :) But I do plan on seperating the two. Thanks for the insite though! Its much appreciated!

dano/screeny/disgruntled - thanks mates!

Cat - DOH! I knew something looked off on her head, and I couldn't figure it out! :blink: And any advice from the resident Star Wars Artist Star is welcome!

xal - LOL :laugh: That was one of the funniest things I read all day!

Don - I know how you feel about lady artwork, so I'm glad you feel that way about my piece. :)

jedi - Thanks! Your no slouch yourself!

Fresco - :har: Best ANIMATION EVER! Thanks for the kind words. Can't wait to do our 1 second meetings this year in Wizard World like we do every year LOL.

[TDHodges]

Something I'm working on for fun inbetween Projects and commissions. Not done yet with Pencils wanted to show the class.

http://www.myonlineimages.com/members/MankindRam/images/P0.Leia.jpg


The 2 things that sorta bother me is the Blaster and the boobs. Her breasts weren't as "out there" as you have them. And the Blaster seems to be too blocky and gets a bit lost in the background.

Nice stuff though!

[RAMolinelli]

Thanks Tom. I plan on rounding out the gun a bit. As far as the tremdous jugs Leia has.......................well being its a drawing for myself I like em big LOL :laugh: ;) Thanks though seriously I will definitely fix that gun.

Rich

[RAMolinelli]

http://www.MyOnlineImages.com/members/MankindRam/images/P1.Leia.jpg

Thought I would post up the finished pencils.

More to come.

[Biofungus]

I'm losing the perspective of the floor and walls behind her. She looks fine though.

[Cat]

Yeah..I saw the same thing...the perspective on the floor is way off...it is too high on the right(and it looks like a wall rather than a floor) and the left looks like a wall that is perpendicular to the one in the back...if that is the case then the trooper would not fit in that position. Also with his head where it is..she must be standing in a hole...I think you may want to just ditch the trooper...otherwise..it is golden...

[RAMolinelli]

Hey guys thanks so much for the crits. I removed the hand of the tropper and left the helmet as I want some kind of story telling element in there. I fixed the confusing lines also. Upon Cat's crit I noticed that I never finshed the line from the bottom of the wal under Leia's elbow. So I hope that helps with the confusing wall intersecting with the back wall. Its supposed to be the hallway where she finds R2 right after she shoots down some troopers. I don't know I made that part up myself LOL! :laugh:

Thanks again guys I remember now why I used to come here so much!