Pin-up power

[Poladium]

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/7239/mannakin3qg6.jpg

Just the sample work..testing my skills whule waiting for people to answer in another (more technical) topic (http://digitalwebbing.com/forums/showthread.php?t=103901) of mine.
Hope to hear some critics and suggestions. :laugh:

[Grant Perkins]

:huh:

[Poladium]

Paradox--? :huh:

[Grant Perkins]

That's better, you edited the pic in ;)

[Poladium]

Either the drawing is too bad or two good.. :banana: Not many opinions so far. Guys,I want your crits! :) Shake me hard! :thumbs:

[JeffW.]

I really like the linework here, but I think her arms may be a tad skinny, she doesn't look like she could beat up any bad guys.

[xaltair]

I like the face and hair a lot. I don't like the arms at all, they do look ultra skinny. The pose is good but since she's wearing a suit and you can still see her rib cage contour and everything it does seem like she's very skinny herself. Also, because of the pose and not seeing the feet she looks like she's about to keel over to the left.

:)

[Poladium]

Guys,hands issue accepted. I`ll keep it for future reference.Any other bugs to fix? I`m personally not really comfortable with her breasts.. :sure: