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inkdevil
01-07-2007, 06:28 PM
http://jeffwamester.com/gallery/comics/kael_final.jpg

The Anti-crest
01-07-2007, 06:34 PM
Looks cool. I remember seeing the initial sketch you posted and can see how you've brought the charecter out.

Cat
01-07-2007, 06:37 PM
ok..that is just FREAKING SWEET!! I love the muted colors..and the fact that it is still has a sketchy line quality to it..just awesome!

kong
01-07-2007, 06:49 PM
I don't know what it is but whatever it is.. YOU GOT IT!
Awesome work.

sevans
01-07-2007, 09:04 PM
You need to move the thumb down more so that it overlaps the fingers and is more obvious ( I almost didn't see it at all), at the moment (to me anyway) it looks like his hand is on backwards because his little finger almost looks like a thumb.

Otherwise, very nice colour scheme.

chaosgoat
01-07-2007, 09:11 PM
:w00t: Ooooohhh.... pretty

Very nice.

teach
01-07-2007, 09:31 PM
Looks great. I like the painterly style and muted colors.

inkdevil
01-08-2007, 11:17 AM
The Anti-crest, Cat, kong, chaosgoat, teach
Thanks!! Glad you all likes!!

sevans
I agree and disagree...

- I disagree that the thumb needs to move down. I believe the proportions are right.

- On the other hand I believe you are right, it is confusing. The thumb seems to disappear into the fingers. I will have to fix that... thanks for the crit, it was a good spot ;)

steveo
01-08-2007, 11:52 AM
Nice...

I'd just move the other fingers to the right and it's a keeper. Proportions are fine it's the position that's off. The thumb needs to move to the left but it can't because of the sleeve...so try moving the other four fingers right and see what happens. You certainly have the room with the wide sleeve.

:)

Great job.

SteveO
e3w

Laufman
01-08-2007, 01:02 PM
Hey this is Awesome! Nice work!

The DarkMind
01-08-2007, 01:10 PM
...Proportions are fine it's the position that's off. The thumb needs to move to the left but it can't because of the sleeve...so try moving the other four fingers right and see what happens...

I think i have to disagree slightly on that. the position is fine all around including the hand and fingers. the stance and hand posture suggests the character is about to draw his revolver much like an old west showdown in which case it is the relaxed position of an experienced gun fighter. the only change should be the holster strap securing the gun should be unfastened and perhaps a thicker line to seperate the thumb from the other fingers and a slight shadow cast by the sleeve across the top of the fingers.

Very nice work indeed.

zombiekiller 013
01-08-2007, 01:14 PM
freaking awesome work inkdevil. i give it a flippin sweet. i really dont think there's anything to knit-pick about this one. it's a great concept and you executed it very well. solid colors and expression. i'm a fan.

trialsze
01-08-2007, 10:47 PM
This is just nice. I love this pic and it really makes me want to see more of the concept. Hope you get it going.

steveo
01-09-2007, 10:20 AM
I think i have to disagree slightly on that. the position is fine all around including the hand and fingers. the stance and hand posture suggests the character is about to draw his revolver much like an old west showdown in which case it is the relaxed position of an experienced gun fighter. the only change should be the holster strap securing the gun should be unfastened and perhaps a thicker line to seperate the thumb from the other fingers and a slight shadow cast by the sleeve across the top of the fingers.

Very nice work indeed.

Well, I disagree with you so there!

:nyah:

SteveO
e3w

The DarkMind
01-09-2007, 10:44 AM
Well, I disagree with you so there!

:nyah:

SteveO
e3w

Curse you SteveO. there is no comeback known to man for the "so there".

you win... this time :mad:

steveo
01-09-2007, 10:48 AM
Curse you SteveO. there is no comeback known to man for the "so there".

you win... this time :mad:

My "so there" master taught me well.

:)

By the way, I added you as a friend on comicspace.

SteveO

The DarkMind
01-09-2007, 11:01 AM
My "so there" master taught me well.

:)

By the way, I added you as a friend on comicspace.

SteveO

A little TOO well I'd say.


:w00t:
Cool, just approved it. Thanks!

INFINITEDREAMS
01-09-2007, 05:45 PM
Hey, This is freakin awesome. Nice job!

inkdevil
01-10-2007, 09:11 AM
INFINITEDREAMS: Thanks glad you like it ;)

Hanzou
01-10-2007, 09:47 AM
I like this guy's costume, and the muted colors definitely give this piece a unique look. Good stuff! :thumbs:

inkdevil
01-10-2007, 11:53 PM
Hanzou

Ah, the costume... It took quite literally took 100 tries to get it right....

Creativity... sometimes it comes easy, sometimes it doesn't... nature of the beast I guess.

oddsea
01-11-2007, 01:12 AM
Good job Jeff. Solid concept.

Cheers!