Admit It...You'd Hit it!!

[Cydonian]

:rolleyes:

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b209/RSdessaline/My%20Work/Sketch_actionWoman2.jpg

[Spacious Interior]

All the above aside.... One of the little tricks that has helped me is keeping the bottom of the bust line at a parallel with the shoulders. Other than that, the contraposto says it all.

This one kinda' made me giggle. Reminded me of Cleopatra Schwartz from "Kentucky Fried Movie".

[evolver]

""""...What-evaaaa..i do what i wants....."""

[deanlegion]

It seems like she should have a tray of drinks on that hand up in the air. It also seems like she should be giving more attitude. A sassier expression on her face, her hip jutted out even more.

Question...where do the pants end and the shoes begin?

Umm...I have a confession....VH1 has been showing a marathon of America's Next Top Model....and I've been watching (more than I care to admit!). It actually reminds me a LOT of the kind of commentary that goes on around here! I suppose some of the kinds of critiques they give the models' pictures on that show is influencing how I'm critiquing this picture!

[Eric Rabbitsmasher]

Can't say as I see too many issues with this - stylized, but stylistically consistent, good gesture, interesting expression - looks fine to me.

I guess I can see Spacious's point about the breast line shoulder thing, the left breast being closer to the shoulder creates a bit of assymetry - often in this case, it's actually the rib cage, which is pretty flexible, flexing back on that side, i.e., the plane of her chest area should appear flatter on that side to create a bit of a foreshortened effect, with that shoulder being drawn further back.

[Cydonian]

It seems like she should have a tray of drinks on that hand up in the air. It also seems like she should be giving more attitude. A sassier expression on her face, her hip jutted out even more.

Question...where do the pants end and the shoes begin?

Umm...I have a confession....VH1 has been showing a marathon of America's Next Top Model....and I've been watching (more than I care to admit!). It actually reminds me a LOT of the kind of commentary that goes on around here! I suppose some of the kinds of critiques they give the models' pictures on that show is influencing how I'm critiquing this picture!

to the Question, it does'nt...women's clothing dont make sense :p

to the confession...wow.

[deanlegion]

Okay, so I'm a guy who likes America's Next Top Model! I think it's a very creative and artistic show. As an artist, I've been very inspired by some of the photo shoots they've done. Hey, you have to admit, those women are beautiful..."admit it...you'd hit it!!"

Anyway, the reason I even posted here is because I like your drawing, even if the clothes don't make sense and the breasts are out of alignment.

[SweetyPulp]

even if the clothes don't make sense and the breasts are out of alignment.
The breasts aren't out of alignment.