Caveman, Hot Girl, Robot dinosaur. [Archive]

Axel

01-05-2007, 01:11 PM

Here's an older page of mine I realized I had never scanned so I went ahead and did so. lemme know what you think :)

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a22/NinjaMonkeyBoyX/cavemanpage.jpg

Gav Heryng

01-05-2007, 04:22 PM

It's a bit sketchy - sometimes hard to tell what's going on - but other than that it seems pretty good!

Dis

Axel

01-05-2007, 05:17 PM

It's a bit sketchy - sometimes hard to tell what's going on - but other than that it seems pretty good!

Dis

any particulars as far as whats confusing? and do you mean sketchy stylistically or story-telling-wise?

The Anti-crest

01-05-2007, 08:33 PM

Did you ink this yourself? some panels are super flat and the charecters body parts blend into the background.

In the last panel at first glance it looks like hes carrying the tail in his mouth like he tore it off and it was cybernetic. What were seeing though is the back of the tail and the t-rex's hand.

Axel

01-05-2007, 11:34 PM

Did you ink this yourself? some panels are super flat and the charecters body parts blend into the background.

In the last panel at first glance it looks like hes carrying the tail in his mouth like he tore it off and it was cybernetic. What were seeing though is the back of the tail and the t-rex's hand.
I did ink this myself, and I'm not the best inker, and this was actually one of my first tries at inking I've worked on it since then and I may actually re-draw this just to update my portfolio and fix the little issues :)

deanlegion

01-06-2007, 04:44 AM

I actually think the sketchy style works just fine. It looks intentional, not lazy, IMO. That is a HUGE robo-dinosaur! I mean, what does that girl think the guy's gonna do to help? Also, where's his spear in panel 1?

This is fun! I wanna know what happens!

The Anti-crest

01-06-2007, 04:12 PM

I did ink this myself, and I'm not the best inker, and this was actually one of my first tries at inking I've worked on it since then and I may actually re-draw this just to update my portfolio and fix the little issues :)

I kinda like the sketchyness but you should try to make certain things not line up so smoothly. The tail shouldn't be equal to the mouth, the arm shouldn't be so equal to the tail. That sort of thing. Also if you re draw/ink this try to give it more depth. I'm no inker so I can't say exactly how but I'm sure if you read through inkers showcase you'll get some great advice.

Axel

01-06-2007, 05:22 PM

I actually think the sketchy style works just fine. It looks intentional, not lazy, IMO. That is a HUGE robo-dinosaur! I mean, what does that girl think the guy's gonna do to help? Also, where's his spear in panel 1?

This is fun! I wanna know what happens!
the spear is behind his shoulder its just hard to see in this small of a view. :)