a load of superhero commissions i have done

[supreme101]

Hi all
well its been awhile since i have been on here, just been so busy with the drawing (and dating crazys girls...i can pick um) that i forgot about posting stuff here...i know i suck...so anyways heres a few pin ups and commissions i have recenty done for myself or other people.
let me know what you think..im also posting these in inking too.
all the best
dave

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a70/supreme101/predatorartA3small.jpg

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a70/supreme101/supergirlvscyborgsmallinked.jpg

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a70/supreme101/supergirlvsmetelloemallsmall.jpg

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a70/supreme101/batmanovergothamsmall.jpg

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a70/supreme101/ironspider-manintherain2small.jpg

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a70/supreme101/moviebatmantweekedsmall.jpg

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a70/supreme101/watchemenpagesmall.jpg

[Twyla]

The following does not apply to either the first or last images:

I'll leave the better artists to comment on anatomy, perspective, and so forth, but one thing I WILL mention is that they're all seriously hurting for good lines; they're almost painfully static.

Try drawing centerlines on each of these figures and you'll see they're all amost perfectly straight; you NEVER want that! You want flowing curves! A good line will make even a motionless pose leap from the page (or screen, as the case may be).

[Zero-Optix]

Predator and Batman are my favorites. nice work!

[The Anti-crest]

I love the rorschachs. That shit is great.

[Twyla]

david-golding

hi talentless one

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Hi
well you can say that about dave gibbons,john bryne ect...or most of the people drawing for marvel and dc at the moment...so show me some of your work and unless its better than mine...which it wont be...kiss my ass.
all the best
daveI can fully understand some artists being 'passionate' about their work, but doesn't this strike you as a little over-the-top? The whole point of this forum (in case you didn't bother to read the guidelines) is for civil critiques.

I was completely up-front in limiting my comments to posing composition, which I do happen to know fairly well. And to put it bluntly, I certainly do not care to have you trying to bite my head off for the "offense" of trying to be helpful. All your little chest-beating ranting has accomplished is proven to me (and probably others) that you simply aren't worth the effort.

Enjoy this wonderful little bed you've made for yourself.

[theGirlWonder32]

I really like the first and last ones, but I have to agree with Twyla that the ones in between are kind of flat/stiff, in my opinion. Supergirl's expression looks almost exactly the same in both pics. I would also suggest varying the line weights on the inks to make the detail pop out more and help focus on the main character/action. otherwise i like them :)

[OZ!]

I like the first the last and the Batman, BUT you need to watch out on your porportions when jumping into women and be careful when you spot blacks. None of your darker pictures(Spidey, Keaton Bats) have a single light source and if there are supposed to be multiples they were still spotted wrong. Still pretty good, and ease up on the ladies please.

[supreme101]

Hi
sorry about the comments above...i didnt send them, my mate was sat at my computer and i was logged in...im really sorry about that...and i post my work to get feedback so im happy with anything anyone has to say.
as revenge im signing my mate up to every porn web site i can find.
again sorry about that.
all the best
dave

[OZ!]

Hi

as revenge im signing my mate up to every porn web site i can find.

dave

:laugh: