Character design

[Jasen Smith]

Here is another character I created for my novel series. I'm trying some new things with it using more of a painted look.

I'd like to have a more Hyung tae Kim style of colors but...I'm not really sure how to do that.

Anyway this is a work in progress...I like and don't like it so far.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e342/Misteraxis/Gage.jpg

[Jasen Smith]

o and if you have any help to offere let me know...or crits.

[Miguel Marques]

This dark one the blue color. And the scenery could be colored with a neutral color.

[Jasen Smith]

You mean too much blue in the bottom left hand corner?

I agree it doesnt seperate the character enough from the background.

[Miguel Marques]

Excuse me if my sentences are short. . . I don't write the language very well. The blue color could be purer in the character.