Magdalena

[SeanE]

http://www.seanellery.com/gallery/albums/userpics/magdalena_fjm.jpg

Pencils = Francis J Manupal, inks = Tom Schoendorn, colour = me.

Just a quick fun one to do on a Sunday afternoon. Could do with more work and fiddling but ... eh.

comments welcome as always

[SeanE]

changes following crits...

http://www.seanellery.com/gallery/albums/userpics/magdalena_fjm2.jpg

[Miguel Marques]

:) :) :har:

[memoman]

The second one looks a lot more intense.
Although the shading on the upper lips.. .I don't know... it bothers me.